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 <div class="container-fluid about">
 	<h1>About the Live-Streams and Recordings</h1>
 	<p>
-		Video and Audio recording and streaming on the 31st Chaos Communication Congress is organized and performed by the c3voc, the <a href="//c3voc.de">CCC Video Operation Center</a>.
-		We are a group of enthusiasts running lecture recording and streaming infrastructure.
+		Lecture recording and streaming at 31st Chaos Communication Congress in Hamburg is organized and performed by a joint venture of <a href="http://fem.tu-ilmenau.de">Forschungsgemeinschaft elektronische Medien e.V.</a>, <a href="http://www.ags.tu-bs.de/">Wissenschaftliche Arbeitsgemeinschaft für Studio- und Senderfragen an der TU Braunschweig e.V.</a> and <a href="http://c3voc.de">Chaos Computer Club Video Operation Center</a>.
 	</p>
 
 
-	<h2>Licenses</h2>
+	<h2>Licences</h2>
 	<p>
-		The video-stream is licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0</a>. This may not hold true for the slides or the actual performance. If in doubt please contact the speaker directly.
+		The video stream is licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0</a>. This may not hold true for the slides or the actual performance. If in doubt please contact the speaker directly.
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		Although the Licence permits it, we would like to ask you to <strong>not distribute Stream-Dumps</strong>. We try to release finished cuts of the videos as quick as possible at <a href="http://media.ccc.de/browse/congress/2014/index.html">media.ccc.de</a> and <a href="https://www.youtube.com/user/mediacccde">YouTube</a> and early releases of incomplete stream dumps without audio-translation and subtitles and intros and <a href="https://auphonic.com/">unprocessed audio</a> will not help anybody.
+		Although the licence permits it, we would like to ask you to <strong>don't distribute stream dumps</strong>. We try to release finished cuts of recordings as quickly as possible on <a href="http://media.ccc.de/browse/congress/2014/index.html">media.ccc.de</a> and <a href="https://www.youtube.com/user/mediacccde">YouTube</a>. Early releases of incomplete stream dumps without audio translation, subtitles, intros, <a href="https://auphonic.com/">unprocessed audio</a> and missing meta data information is not what we have in mind when we spend three month of preparation in our spare time.
 	</p>
 
 	<h2>Privacy Policy</h2>
@@ -21,9 +20,9 @@
 
 	<p>The following data is collected and saved for an undefined duration:</p>
 	<ul>
-		<li>Date and time,</li>
-		<li>the visited pages,</li>
-		<li>status codes the webserver answered with,</li>
+		<li>date and time</li>
+		<li>the visited pages</li>
+		<li>status codes the webserver answered with</li>
 		<li>your browser and operating system,</li>
 		<li>and the referring URL</li>
 	</ul>